After some really useful feedback from the OCA Critiques forum:
https://discuss.oca-student.com/t/feedback-needed-for-eyv-decisive-moment/4489
I have decided that the images really can speak for themselves so I will not add titles to my final piece. I am still torn on my final set but I think it is looking something like this :
( I will however keep looking at it for a while longer to be certain)